Monday, May 21, 2018

Hymn To Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rise up with passion,
Rise up with joy.
Rise up with Love
That can never cloy.
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Paul Butters
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Chinedu Dike 21 May 2018

An inspirational piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind, in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Well conceived and elegantly crafted with artistic brilliance. I like to rhyme scheme of the poem. Thanks for sharing sir and do remain enriched.

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Paul Butters 21 May 2018

I will surely try to stay Enriched CD. Positivism is my usual creed, tho not the textbook stuff.

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