Friday, May 8, 2009

Hymn Of The Bonekeeper(Minor) Comments

Rating: 5.0

*The following is taken as an excerpt from existent narrative of which I myself have written. It is a minor hymn of the character Krevik and thus is not present in its entirety as he would have it spoken.

Rend the flesh and carve the bone
Flay the living upon bloodied stone
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Joshua Lee
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Paige Nielsen 09 May 2009

To me, this sounds more like an incantation than a hymn, but it's strongly written...and very sinister! My favorite line is 'flay the living upon bloodied stone'-it sounds almost Biblical. Or like a lyric from Slayer. Whichever.

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Amity Quinn 08 May 2009

Joshua Lee you are amazing, and your vocab extends that of which i have ever seen/heard. You should let me read that narrative....

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