Dear, God our father of mercy,
By your power you enlighten us,
From sunrise to this evening,
We have worked very hard.
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Evening has greater importance in natural design. During sunset and after sunset we should worship and offer prayer. We can gain purity through this action.
Kumarmani, Wonderful Poem, Thank you! ! Another " 10"
Hymn sung for God with love is good. Greatest love comes from God through light into Earth. We feel this. This is really great when love is transformed into light of love of wisdom. Love glows and grows with us. This is a great write and you are a nice poet.
This is a beautiful poem! After a day's hard toil, it is so comforting to retire to our beds for sleep and rest thanking God for all the blessings we have received from Him! On our bed we dream of our future and plan for the next day! This poem is so soothing in content and composition! I rate it high with full marks!
An Extremely Beautiful Hymn! ! ! ! ! May We All Rest... Rejoice! ! ! ! ! ... Trust! ! ! ! ! ... And Praise Him! ! ! ! ! All Around Us His Love And Beauty Sings Deeply Within! ! ! ! ! Through The Beauty Spiritually Deep In Your Poetry! ! ! ! ! So Very... Many 10S! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! So Very Much For For Sharing This! ! ! ! !
I think now, you are a poet who always put your senses on spiritual first rather than other senses, which make you different than others...feel Him close may put us near to safe feeling!
Sir, it's sublime piece! You have given some valuable substances to your readers to take their hearts...Top score.