Friday, March 29, 2019

Hylas' Drowning Comments

Rating: 5.0

My body does not match this gold bottle
It sinks, and my heart is full of expectations.
Let it sink and see that it is dead
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2019

You are naked, save the innocence I know that you are good at temptation. And I will borrow your spring water, Indulge yourself. myths and legends are great subjects for an imaginative mind. thank u dear poet. this is a great poem. wonderful. tony

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Shimizu Mizuhala 07 July 2019

Thank you for your appreciation. I hope you can give me more comments.

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