Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Hydrocarbon Comments

Rating: 4.5

carbon has two allotropes
one is graphite-one is diamond
you are one-you are diamond
shines for me shines by me
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Vizard Dhawan
COMMENTS
Amanda Laurent 06 December 2012

A clever, witty write. I like how you spun the idea of chemistry between two people and created the perfect analogy.

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Hazel Durham 05 December 2012

So original with great lines, inspired write!

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Stevie Taite 05 December 2012

I like the idea in this one.

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Asif Andalib 04 December 2012

Interesting poem. I liked it

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