Friday, February 13, 2009

Hush Little One Comments

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we sat down that day,
in the warm sun, on the wavy hills.
We looked around,
and oh what a precious thing
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Dolan Doran
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What a beautifully descriptive poem written with so much sensitivity. I feel I am with you on that warm day on the wavy hills. Karin Anderson

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John Smith 13 February 2009

You have wonderful outlook on life and a wonderful way of expressing it!

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Dolan Doran

Dolan Doran

Greenville SC.
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