Monday, September 3, 2012

Hush Little Baby (Part 1) Comments

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I said yes rather than no
I'll take this as a test, to prove
whether or not I am and if not
that I can be a man,
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Kelvin Owusu
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Captain Cur 16 April 2013

One is always ready for growth and maturation, but never kill off the wonder of the child inside. Enjoyed this poem.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 05 September 2012

this is Truly cute and nice. refining the inner problems and lots of other things here. so nice...! !

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 04 September 2012

This is very nice, Kelvin. This is a very strong determination to be in front of a little baby as in your title. I find the title very intriquiing. Are you declaring this to your girlfriend or are you addressing yourself? Nice way...

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Nader Baheri 03 September 2012

nice one.the same as the other version of yours.

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