Friday, August 10, 2018

Hush Comments

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The light has dulled along the bay,
The ships, not quite so visible
And every wave that lashes down,
Returns to just a hush, for now.
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Sarah Persson
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Edmund Strolis 12 August 2018

This hush wherein life's symphony pauses we become a paradox of all at once being aware of how small we are and yet this revelation lets us grasp infinity in the wonder of the world. The sea and the last gulls circling into descending night...sublime.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 August 2018

I hear the hush again, for now. A sense of hush, once again a hush, And every wave that lashes down, Returns to just a hush, for now....beautiful, simply beautiful. you perceive the nature such a peace, that the reader flows in your peace....... may this peace that lives in your mind be always there and please convey it to us.. tony

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Sarah Persson 10 August 2018

Thank you Tony, I will certainly try :)

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