Thursday, April 1, 2010

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Rating: 5.0

The dainty foot marks like daisy treads,
Loiters in her intoxication,
Places puddles in the perfume trail,
Coo's in enlightenment to my whistle.
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 April 2010

Finest Metaphor…and blended with aesthetic asset … Cosmetically sensuous - Taking delight in beauty… thanks for such a poem… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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