Monday, June 15, 2009

Hush! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hush! Ascetic in the wavy cowl
Holding forth the life's bowl.!

(Islamabad)
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Leloudia Migdali 28 April 2016

Such depth in so few words! Very Good! !

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Sonya Florentino 07 July 2009

i must say you're good with these riddle poems...

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Indira Renganathan 07 July 2009

Philosophical fun wisely versified...and thanks for your comment on mine Saadat

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Rakesh Bedi 26 June 2009

Just two lines convey more than pages, wonderful!

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Surya . 23 June 2009

beautifully told in two lines. vivid imagery.you are really talented. voted10 surya

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Mamta Agarwal 21 June 2009

very vivid images, deep underlying meaning- open to individual interpretation. Mamta

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Hadi Hussain Butt 21 June 2009

one word, excellent! ! ! ! ! !

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Ritty Patnaik 19 June 2009

hey....you have said too much in two lines! genius.compressed thoughts with a lot of meaning.best wishes. ritty.

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a sweet short poem..beautiful writing

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 June 2009

well what can i say dear Sadaat, except thay someday I wish to rite such a short nice one for every one to enjoy.... never being good at haikus or short verses, , ! ! ! ! 10++ with love shan... hey pakistan are true for the semi finals in world cup///SL TOO Cheers! ! ! couldnt come oniline much cause of crikt...

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 17 June 2009

'The silence of this road tell me why the wise one has trodden by' Very well penned. A 10.

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Reshma Ramesh 15 June 2009

lolzz............hmmmmmm...well done! !

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Rafique Farooqi 15 June 2009

life is not an easy way....and time not alway kind......beautifully said

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rago rago 15 June 2009

brief and beautiful................

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