Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, April 8, 2012

Husband's Exit Comments

Rating: 5.0

Widow comes in existence with husband's exit
Painful memories to last with shaky feet
Whole life is in dark with no solution in sight
Life becomes burden and nothing goes right
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2012

Rizvana Parveen Good composition.A realistic picture of a widow and her plight in today's society.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2012

Juwita Heart Optimization of the dignity of women showed positive symptoms, as he fell he did not really hurt, other forms can not be predicted more strongly than imagined, you see it, should have another look... is not about winning or losing and the fun...luv you Mehta! 2 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2012

Dear Hasmukh Bhai, You have shown the plight of a widow Who is like a cow without a meadow You have shown your deep sympathy And expressed your heartfelt empathy K.H. Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Apr 09,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2012

Juwita Heart Optimization of the dignity of women showed positive symptoms, as he fell he did not really hurt, other forms can not be predicted more strongly than imagined, you see it, should have another look... is not about winning or losing and the fun...luv you Mehta!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2012

Re: Husband's exit (Score: 1) by Zbird on Sunday, April 08,2012 (18: 43: 21) you always find strength in women and I am sure women find strength in your poems.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2012

Cyn BuhainBaello A very timely poem about the metamorphosis of the modern woman, and the new definition of a widow. A husband's exit out of a woman's life does not spell its end, for some, like me - it meant a relief and release and made a new woman out of me. Thank you for writing this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2012

Widow comes in existence with husband’s exit Painful memories to last with shaky feet

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