Are you happy now?
The things you have done to me
For the tears I shed
Happy, for making me bleed
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Ouch! A painful poem! But Loyd Taylor is right: you are better off without him. Here's wishing you true love and happiness in the future.
Hello poet friend Piumi. You have captured the painful side of love. Good work, I enjoyed, Loyd PS: Please check out my new book on Amazon or Barnes and Noble, Pumpkinny Tales. Thanks for your support.
The poem expresses the feeling against the other half I think and expressions are beautifully written in this poem.Only imaginations of thoughts I think.
Good morning poet Piumi. I enjoyed your poem, but I think you are better off without him, don't ever allow a person to have such control. I enjoyed, Thank you for reading, reviewing and commenting on my poem. Loyd
You said right, 'People leave but scar on heart can't ever be cured' I believe that everyone is selfish in today's world.. Hira
Well, poem has been binded with 'pain' and 'nostalgia'....Liked your poem :) Keep writing Piumi.. :) Hira
A very impressive poem. May I suggest you to read my poems (1) A Guide To Girls In Love, and (2) Birds And Girls.
Hello poet Piumi, you have described what many have gone through in their quest for love and intimacy, I enjoyed. I just posted my poem An Old Soldier along with the musical recitation. If you have time, please check it out and let me know your thoughts. Thanks, Loyd
Lost love, surely has to be painful. Pain is frothing out of the words you used. Like other poems of yours, this too has a sharp, powerful and piercing message. I like it. X