Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Hurting Comments

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So this is where we are now,
Is this it, where you want off,
Your gonna leave me here all alone,
Why, I don't deserve this,
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Kayla Duf
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Afzal Shauq 27 May 2009

hmmm so emotional... and well written..'give me my heart back'' sweet line.. and the whole poem is very impresssive an intgeresting... touching my heart... but my poetry doesnt touch your heart as i think... your short comments shows... while I asked for long comments to know more... best of luck the best friend

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