Monday, April 7, 2008

Hurting Comments

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Thanks for lying.
But still every day im trying.
To look past you.
Because not a thing you do.
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Aijaz Asif 19 September 2008

a great write jacqlyn, and I agree with what paul said...keep writing

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Paul Buttigieg 12 April 2008

Jacqlyn, This is good writing but you do not need to announce who you are. All of us writers are allowed to be anything and anybody, what we must do is evoke interest in what we write not what we are. Who cares if you are a lesbian or a car salesman, what the reader will care most about is the journey endured in your story telling. Keep writing I am encouraged by your ability. Your Lesbianism is your right kid but write about things in your heart from a poiint of view that all lovers come from irrespective of sexual preference.

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