Hurt Me Again Comments

Great deal hashmukhbhai, Interesting theme Kunthi matha also prayed for Krishna while asking her step mother what will i do for you 'give me dear krishna heartfull of Pain' that is the satisfaction....thanks

Dear Hashmukhlalbhai, Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem bubbling with confidence in Gandhian philosophy. I liked the poem though in some places you may re-work the rhyming pattern to have a better flow -personal opinion only. Saying that I have rated your poem highly. The beginning lines strikes me most: 'Why don't you hurt me again? If that helps you to position regain Either way it has to be somebody's gain Concern and worry should not remain' Like an actor entering the stage, you have overwhelmed your audience simply with the beginning lines. Rajkumar

nice poem too.always people do hurt who loves them inorder to keep loving them.

'Two wrongs do not make a 'Right'' Your thinking need to be re-viewed by, 'Self' All that are 'Self' are Godly Love is God and All that exists are of 'Love' Kindly reflect and allow Empathy, Love and Compassion to Heal

Insult if that what you have in find? No best opportunity you may find

Insult if that what you have in find? No best opportunity you may find Hurl abuses at me if you feel so unkind

might have hurt your feelings I have regrets and also willing To offer unconditional apology

''i may wish them success but don't hurt me again''...my goshhhhhhhhhhh...so sad...uhummmmmmm...smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Very Good, somewhat of a 'pick-yourself-up-and-dust-yourself-off' message.

Either way it has to be somebody’s gain Concern and worry should not remain.//////////nice one...10