Monday, October 5, 2009

'Hurt Me' Comments

Rating: 5.0

She said hurt me and it hurt me
but I did it because I loved her,
at least that’s what I told myself, but I didn’t believe that and neither did she.
We just met three hours ago -
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I write because I have to
COMMENTS
Gold Fish 09 October 2009

Absolutely brilliant. I agree with Quin you have a unique ability to capture the reader from the first line, and passionately driven through the last. Full of vivid images and strong emotions. You are very talented.

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Quin Faas 05 October 2009

you know how to capture the reader... suspense filled....

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Gwendalynn Ash 05 October 2009

wow...so full of emotion.

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