Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Hurt Lost And Broken* Comments

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I hate feelings
I hate being able to care
I hate feeling empty inside
when someone dose something
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Seema Chowdhury 26 November 2008

its a nice poem where your feelings are flowing out with anger and hurt. but remember it is just a phase that will surely pass by and you will see how colorful and bright life is and you will be forced again to love it. good luck and take care.

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Silence Dogood 12 November 2008

when you open up your chest up and hand them a knife and say please don’t stab my heart just cut away my worries thats my favourite part overall the poem is okay certain parts I really like though

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