Monday, June 16, 2008

Hurt Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last night I sat on my bed and wept,
My heart was so heavy,
I have been disappointed again,
Broken and hurt by the same person who said they wouldn’t
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Elizabeth Jacqueline Mpanga
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Full of emotion, descriptive poem. Loved the last stanza... putting your hope and trust in the Lord to see you through. Good write; D

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

A beautifully composed poem, but hurt is the core. I love it and 10. So emotional!

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Alice Affi 16 June 2008

I love the end. The emotions in this poem are really powerful. To be fulfilled you need more than just love, you need God.

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