Saturday, June 21, 2008

Hurt Comments

Rating: 3.9

Tears fall down her face,
her heart breaking in to a million pieces.
She breaks down no one knows why.
then she screams 'TELL ME YOU LOVE ME! ',
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Melissa Schreuder
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Gilberto Diaz 30 March 2009

I believe you could write a good story. This Poem kept me going and wanting more. Great JOB. WOW!

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