Hurt Poem by Melissa Schreuder

Hurt

Rating: 3.9


Tears fall down her face,
her heart breaking in to a million pieces.
She breaks down no one knows why.
then she screams 'TELL ME YOU LOVE ME! ',
she grabs a knife and puts it to her wrist,
she bleeds,
the room spins and spins,
she falls to the ground.
She wakes up in a
hospital wondering why she still alive,
she did it intentionally,
she didn't want to live.
She cry's again,
she gets up from her hospital bed
and looks down at the ground,
that's ten stories down,
she opens the window and stands
on the sill of it she take one last breath
and then jumps...
when she hits the ground she dies,
a angel comes for her and said look
what you've done Melissa...
I look down and start to cry again
I ask if I can go back, but she says
'it's to late she polls me away
I try to fight but she fights back harder
she tells me it's ok don't be afraid
it's better this way you can rest close your
eyes and you'll be in heaven soon,
I close my eyes and sleep for ever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gilberto Diaz 30 March 2009

I believe you could write a good story. This Poem kept me going and wanting more. Great JOB. WOW!

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