Hurt Comments

Feelings of hurt beautifully analysed and depicted in this piece.

Sentiments and attachments. they are the summary of mundane life. Liked the mild sad tone in this well written piece 10+

Sad and bitter! ! ! ! ! Facing the odds of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

hurt the hurt the loving heart they break it make flat o; yet we the love live in light kick the dark................///

A poignant and heart rending write. The pain is greater when it is caused by our loved ones. But sometimes the pain they caused fuels us to be better, strive harder to have a life of our own, far better than the life they have. Pain will be.healed in God's own time. A wonderful poem that deals with realities of life. Well conveyed write.

N-ightmare hugs my brain I-nk of dream kisses my pain G-rasps me fully with the bundle of bone H-urts me amid my sweet dream T-ricks and traps my to walk on showing path M-erely I follow a cheated dreamy birth A-im is destined to beat my sanity R-ightly I find myself in insanity E-rase O dear all my path of tears ACROSTIC!

'All they give us is pain That we cannot explain When we try to make it They go around and break it They go all the way To block our way And then here we are sitting in the dark With a broken heart! ' - These are heart rending lines! Despite the despair, the poem is appealing!

sadly this poem describes everything that I have been feeling lately

I believe that whatever the situation we face in life, the pains, sorrows, disappointments... we must learn to keep thing in stride. We must propel our spirits to greater altitude, so that we can be able to look down on our tribulations. I like the articulation and penning of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.