Saturday, January 19, 2013

Hurt Comments

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hurt is the pain which leaves a person scarred.
hurt makes us more alert.
hurt is what i feel when you force your hand up my skirt.
hurt is what makes us feel so heavy but yet so empty.
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Lucy Grainger
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Xelam Kan™ 06 February 2013

if it happens to you indeed hurting me as well how cruel those hands are plucked a bud b4 blooming intensely tragic and hurting....

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Karoliena Somura 28 January 2013

I liked the poem, the rhyme pattern was really good and addicting, and I know what its like to turn to your mother just to have her turn away, she did that to me too when I told her what my dad did... thats life.

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