Friday, June 1, 2012

Hurt Comments

Rating: 5.0

Warm tears trickle down my face like a cold rain.
Mirrored glasses fog as they try to conceal my pain.
The hurt inside consumes me like a black hole.
Tearing up everything that crosses its event-horizon!
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Dougie Fresh
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Ebi Robert 28 June 2012

Beautiful. Nicely composed here.

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Theo Williams 27 June 2012

I feel your pain in the words my friend. Wonderful write. This poem is going to MyPoemList for sure. Excellent work

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Ruth Walters 27 June 2012

You need a hug, I think and a big dollop of sunshine.......

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Darkangel Flyfree 14 June 2012

wow that is so how i feel. You are an awesome writter.

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