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i have to go back
they render too many lashes to my back
the chains and shackles bind me
on this foreign land i cannot be me
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If I were you I would heed what Mr Romeo Della Valle says, he can see what others cannot, if you have him in your comments then you are what he says, rich in talent, vibrant in what you say, you deserve his complaiments and praise. I think its a wonderful write on how you express yourself, and yes people can be forceful at times, hurts alot I know.
Amazing! A powerful outburst of the heart, Ralph! Your great poetic talent is so clearly shown through this well penned and poignant write that you must keep it up! 10+++ Well deserved! I honestly like your strength and potential shown in this fantastic, rich in imagery and fine texture write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...
Oh, it's a sad poem.. Poignant write, , Well written my friend, , it touched my heart, , If you like to read some of my poems regarding this theme, then plz read 1) freedom 2) save me! 3) refugee bird.
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7/28/2025 4:08:07 AM # 1.0.0
but i work in anguish and hunger, , , , , , , , , , , , this is very powerfull....................great poem, i can see your words...