Monday, September 26, 2011
Hurt Comments
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Shall we murder eternity,
And sleep upon dead clouds?
I have drunk sips of
Your poisonous immortality.
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David Beckham
27 September 2011
I find elements of this very seductive, especially the two lines. Great craft and imagination. keep it up.10/10
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Dave Walker
27 September 2011
Good poem as always. Hurt is always there If we like it or not. You can even make hurt Sound beautiful in your poetry.
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8/9/2025 10:22:53 PM # 1.0.0
Never disappoint me, even it's hurt to see but it really a beautiful one well i have to agree with Dave one more time, this hurt sounds beautiful in your poetry than the real things... :) Keep more to come! _Unwritten Soul