Hurt Comments

Shows much pain in this poem.

Its coz u love him from the bottom of ur heart.

'why is it when i hear that you're are in the arms of another it rips a hole in my heart' Perhaps because when we love with great love or passion, we invest more than just a part of ourselves, we invest hopes dreams, an essence of love from our souls. The realization that our beloved is lost, our trust betrayed our hope gone, is the killing off of a part of us. A better nobler part of us, born of love of who we have recently been. This leaves a tear, a hole in our heart soul that we must repair. Again we must rise up, believe again, love again. You have rather a gift of asking the right questions. :)

nicely done. Questions are great, gets us thinking. Everyone pretty much can relate to this poem, we all been there, and those who haven't probably will. A learning experience 4 all.

Your emotions simply spill out in this one. It takes a lot to write out what we truely feel inside, but you did it (: it's hard to accept the fact that someone moved on while you still haven't, but it's just the way things are and always will be unfortunately) : but anyway, I read all your poems, and this one along with all the others are absolutely great!

it is only through the pain that we learn to love more fully... another good job!