Sunday, November 21, 2010

Hurt Comments

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I wished things were different, truth be told they're not,
It hurts to know I have nothing even though I've given you all that I got.

Hurt and at an all time low,
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Anita Khelawan
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Luz Hanaii 19 July 2011

Very good I like this line, 'Now I have to look for the pieces of my heart so they can be mended.' Also love the last line... glad that even after this hurt you saw something positive.

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