Hurt Comments

wow this one is very deep. great job

Sadness can overshadow us for moments though not if the positive force in us human beings is willing to survive. Really nice poem this one is.

incoming dirt - lifes bull-

You make me feel like you could be cutted right now and you wont bleed! I feel like this right now... Too much pain getting inside, making us getting so empty...your words really touched me! Thanks for sharing!

i really like it, it sounds like a sad poem. i thinki you are a great writer