Hurrying off in a hurry
The damsel left the cottage
Nelly had gobbled up nearly
The bread and sizzling porridge
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I love how you made a complete story in all but a paragraph. *giggles* I long to create something to solid yet short. Bravo unto thee! ! !
This is another masterpiece! ! I'm so entertained by your stories inside of poetry! !
I love it Ralph its a really good write..smiles mind if I ask you to check out my poem The Swan Song...its a poets version of The ugly little duckling. Tell me what you think. Quite sad and so, how do you say it...snobbish I think of the women in a hurry...to look down at the poor peasant that sells cabbage.
Excellent poem- I really enjoyed this- thank you for sharing it with me- CAK
Very powerful and suspenseful- I enjoyed reading this very much- thanks for your invitation to read it- Claudia Krizay
A very nice tale told in poetic form. Well done!