Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Hurry-Hurry-Hurry Comments

Rating: 4.8

Hurry-hurry-hurry...
Hurry is the word I hate
hasten I dislike
everyone is always running, is this our fate
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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David Wood 04 January 2022

Over the Millennial's walk with mobile phone in one hand and a hot drink in the other.

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Nabakishore Dash 04 January 2022

Very decent poem Madam.Hurry, worry and curry make us sorry.

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Nabakishore Dash 22 December 2021

Hurry causes all sorry.Beautifully written poem Mam.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 August 2019

Simply amazing poem, Sylvia. A poetic gem. This write can set the mind to abide what is set forth on this wonderful poem. Must be Poem Of The Day! ! !

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Michelle Robertson 17 January 2019

Absolutely brilliant!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2019

Thank you so much for your kindest comment. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your family.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 December 2018

Have to put this beautiful and clever write to my Poem List. 10+++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2019

Grateful for your visit here on my poem site, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin. I am happy to have met you on PH. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 December 2018

There are times when we do hurry because of the demands of work and family. Majority of us if not all could very well relate to this wonderful poem on life. A powerful poem, too since by reading this poem, this could fuel the mind to change someone's lifestyle and take a little time to enjoy life. Cleverly and beautifully written.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2019

Thank you so much for your grand compliments, Mrs.Juan-Austin, I am humbled and honoured to read these grand compliments coming from you. it's very interesting for me to know your vision about this poem. Thank you so much for your attentive and sympathetic comments and compliments. I appreciate them greatest.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 December 2018

FANTASTIC! The title and the fascinating opening lines just drew me to read this marvelous write. You nailed it, Sylvia. Such a wonderful and meaningful message for each and everyone living in this materialistic world.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2019

Thank you so much, Mrs. Juan-Austin, I just knew how to find the responses on my poems and that's why before this period I could not give my responses to the feedbacks, comments en compliments given on all my poems. I sound so stupid, but IF I did not know yet, then I cannot say my thankfulness to the poets who have visited my poem site. Now I already know, it looks so easy,

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Luz Hanaii 26 June 2018

now you need not walk and hurry it's late please for God's sake, take a decent bike yes, everyone seems to be in a hurry, people don't stop to smell the roses, too busy smelling the coffee at Starbucks. I guess everyone rushes in every country now a days. Happy Birthday dear friend!

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WOW! What a grand visit from you, dear Luz. Thank you so much for the words you wrote here for me. After I came back from Ghana, I just read this. Perfect remarkable notes from your side, I feel blessed with your visit and be blessed grandest, dear Luz! This poem was from Poetfreak period. My Birthday is not in this period, but thank you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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