Friday, September 21, 2018

Hurricane Truth And Lies Comments

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The air felt the same
back when we experienced the hurricane
the memories are so vivid of that terrible day
our house a boat between the ocean and bay
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Aqua Flower
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Captain Cur 22 September 2018

A potent hurricane, a life threatening and changing event, a political statement. You are correct truth will float to the surface. It is a shame it has to take this form. The Captain believes it is time for a mutiny.

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Aqua Flower 22 September 2018

The captain is right! A mutany is a good insight! The princess has awaken and the mutany is in the making. Thank you for your comments and encouranging advice!

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Bill Cantrell 21 September 2018

A poem most definitely with meter that seems to have suffered the test of love? There is a deep ness to this poem, great style! !

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Aqua Flower 21 September 2018

Yes, my friend, it was definitely a life changing event. You get to know who is really there for you. Thank you for commenting. It's been on my mind a bit much this year.

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