Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Hurricane Season Comments

Rating: ★4.5

The quay is quiet
after the day’s riotous
weather. We wonder, stunned,
about such fundamental
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Hans Ostrom
imagine scream weather facts Hurricane
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Tom J. Mariani 02 November 2007

I would classify this as a 'sound' poem. The alliterative sounds you put in the reader's head: quay - quite, knocks as battered docks rock, and some half-rhymes in the middle all work. Like the birds screaming, you make it real by having us imagine.

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Hans Ostrom

Hans Ostrom

California
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California
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