Sun comes and goes
So desperate, my mind is spinning
'I am single' the wind is singing
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The beginning arena of this poem is much attractive and fantastic. This poem on love and romance has been inscribed hauntingly with nice diction. Thanks for sharing.
I can't recognise my mistakes And they can't tell me They don't love me Yes, if they love us they should let us know what our mistakes are. A lovely thoughtful poem.
Such a good manner on courtship..... a huge ten+++++
Nice and lovely rhythm. Thanks for sharing such lovely poem that is insighful. I love the ending