Thursday, November 19, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

It is inside the vanilla coating of sky
faltering insignias opening like petals in my mind.
The autumn, so vacant;
falling under the inside,
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Krissy Disillusion
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Brian Jani 07 June 2014

Krissy I'm a fan of this poem

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G. Murdock 13 February 2010

This is a visual poem filled with imagery which is sometimes disturbing or dystopic. I enjoyed the fragmentary effects of these images, like bursts of breaking glass.

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Gilbert Trevino 01 December 2009

Thanks I feel it too Gil

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