Thursday, October 11, 2012

Hungry Pity Pete, Five Days Long Comments

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'Pity' Pete, as hungry as he can be
Shot a patridge on a pear tree
And took home the fowl to roast
With rum he bought for a toast
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Okonkwo Osamedua. Allen
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Bri Edwards 16 November 2012

allen, i like this VERY MUCH. it is good i think that i am familiar with the 12 days of christmas song, but i would like it nonetheless. i wonder what happened to peter. ever think of tackling all twelve days? ? oh yeah, i believe you mentioned farmer(s) three times but the last two times you left out one R. thanks for sharing. bri edwards i'll add your poem to mypoemlist.

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Okonkwo Osamedua. Allen

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