Thursday, June 18, 2009

Hungry Boy Comments

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He sits outside his shanty
Dark skinned in tattered clothes
Hair dishevelled eyes soaked in tears
Hunger making him cry
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vijay menon
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Dhanya M G 29 October 2009

I have always felt this, the rich are least bothered about lifting the spirit of humanity, rather they toil hard to lift the spirit! !

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Sandra Martyres 05 October 2009

This is such a sad tale of want amid an ostentatious display of wealth...very well presented Vijay.....I am sure your piece will touch the hearts of a lot of people...hopefully

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Ted M 28 August 2009

If the fortunate of us, just keep aside a little for the unfortunate ones, that'll go a long way to save them hunger. nice write.

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a touching poem..and your strong words and thoughts always said at the end of your poems....well said

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rago rago 18 June 2009

painful to go through........ yet there are many people suffer daily........ well penned.......

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