Hunger (Senryu) Comments

truth of life in short lines...good piece...thanks

this is almost funny but the title tells me it shouldn't be.... which goes to show how thin the line between comedy and tragedy.....wish I wrote it.....! :)

Very powerful message

this says a lot about the length someone might go to be fed......

standing on the head walking on a rope singing lovely songs on the road..the blind hungers drives the world

Brings to mind that childhood nursery rhyme; there was an old woman who lived in a shoe. It ends with, 'she whipped them all soundly and put them to bed' lol. Don't know why it should remind me of something I haven't thought of in 15 years, since my little one was a little one! (smile)