Hunger's Hold Comments

Nice poem. I like the metaphor. a poet friend RH Peat

I liked this piece of poem very much. It really sounds poetic.

The mind can't find, the key to the heart's vault.... as often it happens to all...excelent poem. Thank you for sharing :)

That's a real beautiful poem :)

joys grab at quick roads, that lead to doors of nothingness......... why nothingness i cannot understand joys grab at quick roads, leads to door of peace and happiness........ you must think and write it again, as it is a very meaningful poem.......10

We must have the depths to enjoy the heights... I understand you.

a bold and beautiful poem.fine theme. voted10 surya

Seems to be some suffering inside this one? Up against a strong force that shows no mercy. Good details written in to describe comparisons and feelings. There is something about this one that seems dangerous? I like it. You have put some wild thought into the making of this one. Nice work! Debbie

fine poem. awesome poetry

A very profound piece that holdsthe readers attention from start to finish, Thanks and a 10 from me Lynda xx

I like the spirit of the poem, the words in imagery. Very nice,10

'The world you cannot change ease your heated soul! Only one thing can you do another person well. this already that much the stars themselves will smile but one starving person less means one brother more.' Swedish poem (Stig Dagerman) freely interpreted by me. We must start man to man. Thanks, Nikunj!

Remarkable poem...a profound piece...very nice....10

Beautifully crafted poem. Compelling piece. Great Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

A classic poem indeed with words so well chosen hungers hold gripped and sold to the reade with passion well done +++++10 Been away on hols for a week with no computer regards

hunger itself is good...but what we hunger for makes all the difference....

It is poverty of spirit that causes indifference to the plight of others. I agree with John that compassion begins one person at a time. An excellent thought provoking piece. Kind wishes, Sandra

Nice flow..good write

Your words are chosen carefully and are filled with such emotion. You obviously write from the heart. An excellent poem! '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

this hunger can't be satiated...it's hunger incorporeal!