With hunger comes a somber head,
Thus weakened by the lack of bread;
The filament of will is thinned,
The crop is filled with empty wind;
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man, what I have just read, might be one of the best poems I have read in years! it fatly reminds of the style of T.S elliot and at the same time is as brutal as Russel Edson's poems. The rythmn, the rhyme, the flow and the sounds, all so magnificent! ! I stand in owe.
Mifael, this has got to be your best poem yet! Really biting.. you realy spilled your heart (and guts) on this one... seems you're back with a vengeance....love the raw emotions!