Thursday, February 13, 2020

Hunger, Life's Prime Rhyme Comments

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‘It's all about a bit of bite
‘To eat and fill my hungry maw,
‘To that end these skies I soar
‘Over every inch of land to pour,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 February 2020

rumbling tummy is always hungry adds to more GREED you to all in hunger lovely poetry FEED Do more seed

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 February 2020

...And good feedback fills up my hungry maw, whist opening up further my greedy jaw. Thanks PP.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 February 2020

Hungry face on grey sky though prey but to death!

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 February 2020

Yes, for the prey a grey death, well said. Thanks indeed.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 February 2020

For hunger - Life and time, great write

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 February 2020

Thanks dear poet GM for such uplifting comments.

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