Tuesday, January 31, 2023

Hunger Comments

Rating: 4.8

An orphan child
sitting on a platform
ignoring the sound of fast crossing trains
and trains halting late at the station
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Dr Dillip K Swain
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Koffi Sossou 27 June 2023

This is a very touching poem. The number one pestilent disease sending millions of kids to death is hunger. But the world fail to see it.

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PREMKUMAR C N 23 May 2023

Stunning poem! The hunger of a poor child is illustrated with words,

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Anjandev Roy 28 April 2023

.......inward sound of hunger...... brilliant.....thank u, sir....

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Anjandev Roy 16 March 2023

Simply brilliant piece......thank u, sir....

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5. And this poem will be back in the Best Member Poems List at topmost place!

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4. Hope the error will be remedied soon..

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2. Then I noticed that Dillipji has shared a new poem today. This has happened to me before too. Whenever a new poem is published by a poet, his earlier poem disappears from the Best Poems List, at whatever rank it is placed in the list,

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This brilliant poem suddenly disappeared from the Best Poems of Members featured on PoemHunter. Yesterday, it was ranked #12 in the list. I just wondered why! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 24 February 2023

your poem is painting the scene of a tragic story--well chosen phrases and a tautness the tragedy deserves--tip marks

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Hunger is a reality, even today

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On 2018 February 22; exactly 5 years ago, a tribal youth Madhu was beaten to death in public, by a few lesser human beings. The crime? Madhu stole a piece of bread from a petty shop, because he had had no food for an entire week. In Kerala where "Poverty is unheard of! "

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Today this poem ranks at #12. I hope to see it top, please, PoemHunter

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Anjandev Roy 22 February 2023

The inward sound of hunger......an outstanding write....thank u, sir...

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This is a poem, for which, the entire world is the canvas. Ranked @ #14 today.

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Today, in the Best poems of Members, Chinedu Dike is at #7, Susan Williams at#11, Yoonoos P at 13, Dillipji at #14, Geeta at #15 and LeeAnn @#18. (Other poets upto this level are all dormant members) . Feels really great.

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This poem is now at #14. It sure does deserve better. And it will.

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Today, the poem has scaled up one slot to #13. All the best, Dillipji

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Continues at #13 today

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M.J. Lemon 17 February 2023

The imagery...so stark and vivid. An exceptional verse, Dillip.

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This poem is now ranked #17. It, sure, deserves better

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Hunger is the greatest curse in the world today, which everyone of us need to be aware of, and need to do our best to remedy

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The pangs of hunger gnaws at the tiny body and soul of the little child. May nobody suffer like that, Dillipji.

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Dr Dillip K Swain

Dr Dillip K Swain

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