Hundred Moons Comments

Beautiful wordplay there, Catrina, you getting better with words.

...'a billion of stars, twinkling on your eyes The wrinkle on each satin silk tells, journey of your years Twinkling, giggling, crying, screaming; pleasure of wounds smile'... well, that's really catchy..good poetry...thanks...10

You made me wander and travel with your magical words. This is sooo beautiful I am stunned! This is the best poetry that I have read today. A real poet..a real talent..Wowwww. Love♥ ♥ ♥ Meggie

This is pure poetry You should be proud.. You have reached a level many dream to reach.... 10s

Wow, this thing's a bright beacon, full of magical things, very enjoyable trip.

It is always the season of rain and rainbows, Bluebells and lilies Trailing the dust of hope and twinkling stars of your hundred moons Catrina....your writing just cradled me thru as if......liked it so much.10

Catrina you put the mind in so many places, beautiful write Daniel

The carriage of our horse will sail beyond the frozen lake Beyond the scorpion and snake desert of the colorful mask Worn by on our castle Where we peel off the blooming silhouettes of trees It is always the season of rain and rainbows, Bluebells and lilies Trailing the dust of hope and twinkling stars of your hundred moons On our palms..........................no words to express my feelings.... is the chariot carrying us to the destination sorrounded by rainbows....oh lovely imaginations....10 read mine back lash.... not easy..

imagination cheryl yours knows no bounds 10

Catrina, a very beautiful poem with wonderful imagery. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

three cheers to your hundred moons!

Truly poetic. Last verse and the way it had ended is really nice. Specially these lines lines I liked a lot...'As the fog kisses the hills at dawn to taste...The sweetest dew drops left upon the nation’s lips'~Wonderful work.

What a very... imaginative poem...iip