Sunday, September 13, 2020

Humpty Dumpty Comments

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No good if every moment all you brood turns into a plight
I wish I didn't marry as in my life you pluck slivers of light
In sentiments so spangled they strangle the breath
My mortal mind kicks to fraternise the faith
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Deluke Muwanigwa 13 September 2020

Wonderful poem my brorher. The flow the rhyme the metaphors the clarity. I would nominate this for POTD if i had the power. I hope though its just a poet doing what they do best and not reality..coz if real it hurts. Great one.

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