A sense of humour in my mind
Go to sleep, better be clear
Restless thoughts had to stay
Some may make laugh the next day
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a very vague implication...to a dream..and Luke Easter is right what he said...
Rohan, I think I like this one. No one knows if they are laughing in their sleep; but if others are watching they see you. I thought it was creative and artistic how you included the idea 'How can we trace a reaction within our dreams' What was so funny that made me laugh in my sleep? That is funny in itself. Thank you for letting me read this one.
Sense of humour can help one to be more healthy. A good theme you have taken.
a great poem on the common phenominon in a different way...artistic Rohan....well done....keep writing...you have my 10 out of 10
This really does have a lovely sense of pace and an almost musical quality. It moves almost like a dream itself not always following a logical trail but still on your subject almost as though it is see through a veil. I really like this one!