Sunday, March 27, 2005

Hummingbird Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun shone today,
leaving a ray of hope on the pillow.
Caressed gently by the warm breeze,
I pretend to sleep.
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Gary Scott Gebert
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Linda Preston 27 March 2005

Wow, Gary, I like the extended metaphor of the hummingbird - and the metaphor of the curtains. Transported me far away - like good poems should

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Gary Scott Gebert

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Milwaukee, WI
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