Friday, May 20, 2005

Hummingbird Comments

Rating: 5.0

sweet emerald jewel
hover next to my love's ear
and slide your probiscus down to her recesses
not to take her honey
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Anthony Dalby
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Preeti - is here! 20 June 2007

what have you got in that pen of yours? some magical ink? This is amazing stuff!

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Duncan Wyllie 01 May 2006

Much tallent here Anthony, sometimes the words seem to just flow on their own Very clever, Love Duncan

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Patricia Gale 08 March 2006

How the words must have glided off you pen. Wonderful write Patricia

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