Friday, January 27, 2006

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This is the world that I live in
Spin, spin, spin, spin;
Round and round and round and round
With a monotonous sound,
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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

Like the line: 'down the old miasmal way' - again your choice of the right words adds such meaning to your poetry. Well done.

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