Tuesday, July 5, 2011

Humming Of The Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a car that recklessly blasts its way
Through a busy and crowded street
The humming of the wind seems
Not soothing nor cooling but rather scary.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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