My heart humming a love song
With blue throated hummingbird
Hovering over, flapping the wings
Sweet chirps and beeps are enchanting
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Your poem shows a profound and love reacts with equal. There is no room for doubt or confusion. Oh, blessed state of being! You create in words a safe haven for this pure love, a place without a forbidden tree or a treacherous snake - unless both will be revealed later. rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Hunting sweet nectar from honey suckles When sun shines and kisses the breeze. sucking honey.. nice expressions sensing the eros in it.. dev
Sweet Humming.. glorifying that little bird as well our own silent humming for love not heard like ultrasonic sounds, swept away in the busy bustling way of present life and life-styles! ! Pure thoughts well written! thank you 10+++!
Your imagination and your power to perceive the beauty of nature is marvelous. develop this ability and become a great poetess.. it is just fantastic.. thank you dear poetess Rini.. tony
It is a cheerful song, like a song sung by happy humming bird :) liked it
A very sweet poem on falling in love the humming bird tweets a love song. Nice photo too. Liked it.
Very beautiful and enjoyable poem.
Thanks a lot...