James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Thursday, November 18, 2010

Humming Bird Song Comments

Rating: 2.1

You when I call, to obtain from it,
having been troubled from this youth.
Then not as now it is not that fresh for me.
It is not possible now to give up to far and fly away.
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Bri Edwards 30 July 2017

no comments? but i have it in MyPoemList already! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! hmm? anyway, i'll use this in August 2017's showcase, with THIS note from me after the poem: Bri's note: Is It Poetry seems to be one of the most prolific poets on PH. his poems often also seem to be some of the oddest, in that i often do not understand what the Hell he is talking about! ok, i sometimes have an idea, but still i rarely feel i follow the 'story' well. BUT still, besides seeming to be a fine not-so-young man, i find that reading his poems is somehow enjoyable. there is some musicality in some of it. and, yes, there ARE what i call misspellings, but that is NOT the most important thing in life to avoid, even though i usually point them out to poets. i like this guy. :)

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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